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Comment for the book" step to writing well"

11/10/2011

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In the book” step to writing well”, the athor gave steps to help writers. I think if we obey these steps, our writing will be succesfull.

The first, we should select a subject. At the start early, tou need time to mull overs idea, organize your though, revise and polish your prose. And after you should selecting the best place, you should also choose the best time to start your ideas and start your essay. Choosing basing on each person, suitable where and when. Then, selecting something in which currently have some strong ideas, in this step, the author remind that if you aren’t anthusiatic enough about your subject to want to spread the word , picking something else, bored writers, write boring essay; we take ideas from our activities, people, joys, irritation occur around you each day; make a list of all the subjects on which you are an expert, and finnal, narrow a large subject

The second, finding your essay’s suppose and focus: why are you writing about this topic, do your readers need to be informed, what do you were your writng accomplish, must find a clearfocus or direction for your essay

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QUANG BINH AND DA LAT

11/10/2011

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Quang binh and da lat city

Both of two have some special features; if Quang Binh famous for Phong Nha Cave and Nhat Le beach, Da Lat famous again Mong Mo hill, Xuan Huong lake, Langbiang mountain. Each area is restored with particular beauty. Beside that. Quang Binh and Da Lat have some differences about wheather, economic strategy and traffic.

The most different is weather. Quang Binh has long coastall, and is affected by Laos wind, therefore, the weather is really harsh , flood and drought occur every year. In The summer, example, temperature can get 40 to 41, people even don’t want to go out. Although having the long coastall and many rivers, temparature too high makes the water be porated and cause drought. In constrast, temparature only gets from 10 to 12 degree in the winter, with the heavy rain lasts and result is to cause flood over large areas, roll with houses, facilities, and many people die. Da lat is different, the weather is more agreeable. It is quite warm, the average temparature gets from 20 to 23 degree, so da lat is green and peaceful than any where.

The second different is economic development strategy. Basing on the topography of the beach and rivers is main, so quang binh ‘s econic strategy is catch fish with a net and grow rice. Da lat is called “ tourism city”. Annual income depends on tourist. The second , the convenient weather suits to grow flowers and vegetable. This brings high economic profit.

The third different is traffic. Quang binh has national highway, so vehicles always passes with big contanier and causes many accidents. Da lat’s traffic is too narrow and is only city that don’t have red light. It is specific of da lat.

In conclusion, quang binh and dalat city have different features. Each area has particular advantage to develop, give usefulness to viet nam.


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